All Comments on 'The Last Straw'

by BlueTurnSignal

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prostock69prostock69over 12 years ago
This was sooooo much better than I thought it was going to be......

IT WAS HOT! Your writing is very, very good! So glad I took the time to read it.

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 12 years ago
Good show!

Literally!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good dialog

dialog between the men and chris' internal voice is really good. maybe he wasn't so much angry as blown away by finding his topness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot!

Wish I could get my ass pounded by a stud like that! And I'm straight!! I love this, you should do another one.

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