All Comments on 'The Latticed Gate Ch. 01'

Uh, how is this anal?

Sorry, anonymous, I am very new to this site and the instructions for uploading are not very clear sometimes. This is a five part story, the anal part is a little further into the story and I'm only realizing that that was when I should have tagged it. Sorry for your disappointment.

Anonymous might not forgive you but I do. Now how about the other parts?

Prt 2 has been approved to post 3/15, the others should too since I submitted the same day, but they still say pending so it looks like I'm at the mercy of whoever approves!

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Beautiful, sensual beginning and I will wait for the seduction, which is always nicer when it's drawn out, languid, sensual and sexy. I do want more!

This story describes sexual assault by a man who is told very clearly by the lady is not interested. His behaviour after that is criminal. That seen could have been written without the assault with a similar result. As a man I am offended that anyone would find assaulting a woman erotic.

He should have used words and gestures not force to convince him he was what she wanted.

Anonymous I would recommend that you NOT read this series, for your sensitivity and sensibility I believe this story will only get worse as you read. Yes, it may be as you say but the story I'm telling is about more than the sex.

Nice! It was a very good and sexy story. I am about to go read ch. 2. A rape story may have been better, though.