All Comments on 'The Lesbian Boss Pt. 02'

She's a Mistress, not a Master. Also, learn the difference between "you're" and "your".

It seemed rushed. I think if you slowed the pace, the reader could get more into it. For example, in regards to the moving in, how long is "a while?" Also, she came to grips with being with a woman kinda easily as far as the reader knows. Wouldn't her being the boss and living with an employee cause a conflict at work?

Oh, and regarding the "Master vs Mistress" labeling: a dominant can call themselves anything they want ;-)

this is definitely a case where both parts should be read in consecutive order. With that done it is easy to see that this story covers a vast span of time and only the important items were printed. it is obviously a story about two women who though they start apart, end up together partly because they are sure of themselves, and partly because there is a definite attraction between them. I think it is very well told and if it is a true story then I say BRAVO ! and wish you two the best.

i love your stories but do you think you can make them longer and gove more details ? but beside that i do really love them

I really liked this story, I do wish that it was longer and slowed down. all the events felt rushed.

OK SO WHERE DO THEY GO FROM HERE?? IS THERE A SEQUEL?

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Prt 3 ?

I think then bdsm could heat up a bit? Maybe another chapter please.

Hello. Thank you for this story; I enjoyed both parts. A simple narrative and very erotic. I am a fan of lesbian erotica.

As my title identifies, I hope this is based on your (or someone's) real life experience.

T

Liked this story and like so many others on this site, could use additional chapters to broaden the adventures of these two lovers. Like having Lisa start to dominate Melanie, not harshly but in a hot sensual way by making her do things she would never do. Maybe even going overboard and having her seduce Tonya, or expose herself. Keep going if it's hot too late.

could use a followup chapter or two.

For strictmaster12880swb (hopefully I remember that correctly). I have been a Leatherman for over 30. My Mistress/wife has been a Leatherwoman for 35 years. She is in fact a "covered" Master and proudly wears her cover to all formal Leather events. I know a multitude of Female Dominants that identify as Master, so your statement makes no sense. She is also the leader of the largest organization in the world in support of the Master/slave lifestyle. We are both well versed in BDSM practices.

But you are correct about "your' and "you're". Common mistakes in writing

could use a followup chapter or two.

For strictmaster12880swb (hopefully I remember that correctly). I have been a Leatherman for over 30. My Mistress/wife has been a Leatherwoman for 35 years. She is in fact a "covered" Master and proudly wears her cover to all formal Leather events. I know a multitude of Female Dominants that identify as Master, so your statement makes no sense. She is also the leader of the largest organization in the world in support of the Master/slave lifestyle. We are both well versed in BDSM practices.

But you are correct about "your' and "you're". Common mistakes in writing

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Speaking of which, why not bring in Tonya to make it a trio?!

This mini series needs a third even a fourth. Just consider it.

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You seem to go out of your way to create odd ways to identify ordinary things. Here's just one of them:

'She's nibbling on a piece of orange block cheese, ...'

It's a slice of Cheddar. Who would call Cheddar "orange block cheese"? Very strange. Each time your readers encounter strange stuff that is better done in a sensible, ordinary way, it interrupts the flow of the story for no good reason.

It's like taking a nice Sunday drive through a beautiful landscape, but every ten minutes, the driver has to swerve to miss a sinkhole, then a Koala, then a barefooted old woman in a hospital gown, then a huge armadillo, then a cow wearing red rubber boots. It's hard to enjoy the scenery in between distractions.

Good story.Not so keen on the BDSM stuff though.I can't equate love and sex with pain.Sex should be gentle and passionate not nasty and cruel.I don't see how people can think that cruelty is an expression of love.Meh.Whatever floats your boat I guess.As I said a good story.Bring on part two.Please!!!.

There has to be a part 3! The story of Tonya!!!