All Comments on 'The Light Within Ch. 01'

I am so delighted to see you back that I'm leaving this message even before I read the chapter.

Your storyline is so imaginative that it's unique to Literotica as far as I can see. And you write like buttah!

Thanks for coming back.

You're going to tease us with this arc.

Let 'er rip!

please please the next chapter soon!

You updated with a sequel. Did I tell you I love you? That I admire your work and have checked every day if you decided to add a new chapter? The style of writnig is so smootly splendid that its like a great deal of joy to read it. I like how Jayn will be on a verge of orgasm:)

I'm glad to see you've returned to the world of Jayn and Perikos. I'm very much looking forward to the conclusion of the tale. Thanks for writing.

I have read and reread this series and am continually amazed at the smooth story telling and the rich emotions of your characters. Thank you so much for writing these.