All Comments on 'The List Ch. 02'

by handsomeyetnice

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Come on, now!

U know u could've combined 1 & 2 to make a decent sized ch 1 instead of this just writing vignettes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Start

I agree with the other post. Please see if you can give us comprehensive chapters, otherwise it is a good story.

Latinlover15Latinlover15over 11 years ago
Whoa

A foot long dick....

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