All Comments on 'The Literotica Olympics Day 24'

I love this installment! The ships logs were inspired, and I'm convinced that it could really happen this way. Excellent!

and I'll prove it as soon as I get untied.

I love the style you used, being able to see each team from within. Lots of sailing expertise going into writing the story made it even better and of course amazing sex.

Wonderfully written and very hot sweetie!

*hugs*

Your tack was perfect. Your command of the wind sublime. Shake out my sails and give me some extra freeboard. Take the helm, babe, it's a run.

A maritime marvel. Elegant, excellent and damn erotic.

'Now,' I whispered in her ear, 'I'm going to teach you all you will ever need to know about ropes and knots.'

YUM!

loved the eloquence and sublime setting. perfect.

v~

What can I say that I haven't already: HOT!

That was infinitely literate, intellectually laudable and entirely transcendant, negating even the ludicrous assignment in whose spirit it was written. More tedious research to appeal to those who know (I'm not among them). You're a calculated writer.

And god, I'm such a fucking *whore*...

mlle

Amazing. So totally different from all I have read, the attention to detail, the research, the persona of the characters, and the incredible hot sex.

I love the fact it was written as a log entry.

Fucking Brilliant!

Absolutely fantastic! Perfectly done. I am actually having trouble thinking about anything else but the sex scenes...

this story is trim, shipshape and Bristol fashion. Clean, great detail,atmospheric in sense of weather and heat, and diverse in description of how the different crews deal with the stress of competition....love the log's as a method of laying out the story....thanks Lauren

Oh Godddd!!!! You could have warned me it was so HOT LOL!!!!

Damn!!!! Now I need a really long cold shower!!! Now, that's what the Literotica Olympics should be about!!! SEX and more SEX LOL

Damn Hot!!!!!!! ;-)

Hey Laur!

Wouldn't the Canadian boat be disqualified for having a Yank on the crew?

OK, so maybe that's not the most important point of the story, but still...

For once in my life!

All I can think to say is, thank you, that's what I call erotica!!!

Lou

xxx

HOT, HOT, HOT,

Quite frankly Lauren, I am amazed at how you balance the technical with the erotic.

I am still trying to catch my breath. Then again, I am very late in arriving at the Olympics.

... missed my flight, yeah thats it,

Umm, you rock :)

O

you fuckin amaze me.... you SHOULD be doing this for money FOR SURE!!!

awesome as always... UNIQUE!!

kisses,

T

Beautiful writing style. Erotic with full meaning for this sailor who has blue water sailed in many parts of the world.

I know nothing about sailing, but am so susceptible to the symphonic variations of your creation. Enjoyable on every level.

Absolute perfection.