by Ozma12533
please keep writing hey, it's blooy brilliant thus far. can't wait to read more.
Despite how much of a turn off I personally find the whole prostate stimulation as a part of sex to be you at least handled it in a way that didn't completely ruin the story for me. You're a very talented, if somewhat unpolished, writer and you deserve to be told so.
Great job and keep on writing!
2 stars as she seems to. E playing him. Making him eat what he doesn’t want to, anal play and dating his boss when no real flirting was actually necessary but she immediately jumped to it before they even arrived. He needs to dump her yesterday.