All Comments on 'The Loners Ch. 06'

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Mermaid2189Mermaid2189almost 13 years ago

yay i love this story plz make more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Like it

more please

WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastalmost 13 years ago
loving it

please keep writing hey, it's blooy brilliant thus far. can't wait to read more.

green_dreamsgreen_dreamsabout 12 years ago
Not my cup of tea but

Despite how much of a turn off I personally find the whole prostate stimulation as a part of sex to be you at least handled it in a way that didn't completely ruin the story for me. You're a very talented, if somewhat unpolished, writer and you deserve to be told so.

Great job and keep on writing!

FseriesFseries7 months ago

2 stars as she seems to. E playing him. Making him eat what he doesn’t want to, anal play and dating his boss when no real flirting was actually necessary but she immediately jumped to it before they even arrived. He needs to dump her yesterday.

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