All Comments on 'The Loners Ch. 23'

Damn you and your chiffhangers!!! Hurry up and post the next chapter!!!

please hurry with the next chapter i just hope they can save Katie. great chapter

BAD Cliffhanger good story

I, like many of the others am bothered by your cliffhanger, but I have to admit, it's a good one!!!

I hope Katie is somehow saved as I really like her.

FUUUCCKKK.. when's the next chapter coming.. that whole chapter I was waiting for the fight.. and you kept dragging it out and dragging it out.. damn it! (still gave ya 5 stars though :)

What a distressing twist to the story.

Just wanted to add that when Rachel was talking to Liz, she said that she loved Alan and Katie equally, yet before they started their relationship, she stated that Alan would always come first in her heart. So either she said that just to make adding Liz to their relationship easier, or she's going back on her word. To me the relationship has Alan at it's heart rather than it being an equal triangle, or at least this was what seemed to be shown, so why the sudden change?

It through me for a bit of a loop because I was so into the story