All Comments on 'The Long Road Ch. 01'

This is absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read. It has a great plot with just enough sex to make it realistic and enough characters to give it substinence. Keep writing PLEASE!!!!

Its a good story but pages 3 and 4 were almost completely unecessary. It just dragged the story on, which was frankly exhausting to read. Once the drama happened in page 5, i was sucked right back into it. So good job on the intro and the drama. I dont need to know their entire convo of Dante's cove, it was extremely annoying and draggy but still a good story overall