All Comments on 'The Long Road to Ruin Ch. 43'

Hopefully there won't be so much time between chapters...thanks for your stories.

I've really enjoyed reading this! I hope you plan on adding more chapters soon! :)

Chapter 44 has been submitted and is waiting to be approved and posted!

wow! I loved this! I hope Narev gets his end!

And another cliffhanger! On to the next! :D

Was hoping you would add an encounter with Dan and you did. And it was so well done! Thanks for submitting it ... you really are a gifted writer and do a great job at embellishing Valine's excellent ADWR module!

She's such a slut!! I hate it! I think I would enjoy the story much more if Shiloh would just be with Vico and fuck him after make out and confess their love for each other. Tbh I love the story line and the fantasy setting but her slutty behavior just disgust me! Does she have to throw herself at every male?!? The only reason I'm continueing reading this is because of Vico.