All Comments on 'The Looking Glass Ch. 01'

You have got to be kidding me. Someone needs to get out from behind their computer screen and get an actual life.

Please, keep writing.

Other than using "there" for "they're" and "lauder" for "louder" and a few more similar sophomoric mistakes, wasn't bad for someone with such poor command of the language. Try again and use the dictionary.

welcome at literotica and thanks for writing mom son story. but story is not that hot, its happening too fast beetween mother and son. you should need to describe more about moms nudity and sons spy on mom. next ch you should describe some anal sex between them.

I love your story and you've inspired a new story for me. keep writing, and dont listen if people tell you they dont like it.

I lile this story so far, just keep up the good work

Good story, using some classic tropes in the perfect setting - mother/son love. I would like to know more about this couple and their adventures :)

VERY VERY HOT. pLEASE DO SOME MORE ON THIS LEVEL. SUCH A NEW ROAD TO THE EROTIC ENCOUNTERS.

good srart to your story, ive read all of your stories and have enjoyed them all, keep writting more, take this one futher, lets us see what happens after their dirrer date when they get home

I've enjoyed your stories and this one looks like it will continue the successes. I hope you follow up with more chapters to explore how mother and son continue, how mother grows to desire the new relationship and how the son realizes when it's time to destroy the looking glass.

Please let me know when you post new stories.

I can't help laughing the anon remarks that are negative. Fucking fools too afraid to be identified. Man up bitches! Good story the spelling is sort of screwed. I read your newest and see the spelling is corrected.

RS

On to chapter 2

I would say this is one of the better first chapters I've read. Some of thee pepping might be a bit odd, it's mostly understandable. I'd say keep up the good work and maybe get a proof reader.

-MM

It's always good when a boy unloads his hot young balls up his own mother's cunt. Up his mother's twat is where a boy's creamy sperm belongs.

A great start to a series! Loved the hot sex. Can't wait to see what happens next.

So many possibilities! Well developed and just wicked! Yum!

It's like a little touch of Twilight Zone.

But you really need to proof read your work for spelling, missed words and grammar. It was an annoying distraction to have to reread sentences.

"Yes Alice, just step through here."

Good start, I hope more of the mirror's back story is revealed. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I found it to be a well thought out and written piece except for apparently not being proof read. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Only 4 stars as you need to reread or get an editor before you post. Silly mistakes you would have seen if you had read through it

I like this unusual story. I like stories where the characters are developed in both depth and breadth. Likewise, I like logical plot development. As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest in real life, I question if this is consensual. The mother is not conscious of her actions and thus has no memory of the incident. The son is aware of the situation and his actions. Although he loves his mother and wants their situation to return to what is was before the father's death, he has no qualms about having sex with her nor a concern as to the psychological, psychiatric nor emotional effect the sexual activity may have on his mother once she becomes aware of the actual situation.

Okay, this scenario is totally preposterous. But.... after suspending reality & just allowing myself to be propelled along the storyline, as if it was a dream I was in, I loved it. This is a truly wonderful story. Sparlling & grammar aside.

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If I could only get a looking glass myself, for my beautiful, sexy mother, & get to fuck her as she becomes aroused to the thought of a mother & son fucking their brains out