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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Job

Great Job on this! You've got me wanting more! Higher Ransom!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great story. LET'S HEAR MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Colombia is a Country;

Columbia's the District

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great story so far, let's read some more! :-)

hickorynuthickorynutover 12 years ago
Joel and Carrie

I wish I could be Joel when he was fucking Carrie.

HardFeltHardFeltover 11 years ago
Excellent Writing Demonstration

This is one of the best stories on this site.

The writer is talented, provocative and uses words that easily transform into word pictures which adds to the realism of the story.

I wish there was more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
lost city

Very good story, but would have liked more. Like the helplessness of the tourists. Things like this do happen in counties I have heard, absolute power corrupts absolutely.

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