All Comments on 'The Lost World Ch. 03'

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DrednorethDrednorethabout 10 years ago
awesome !!!!

AWSOME AWSOME AWESOME ... it's so damn addicting >:)

J0SEJ0SEabout 10 years ago
I love your stories! I'm tempted to hit every key on the keyboard randomly!

I want more! Abuxrbuddaadfafdhsvjsbynznsvhsbjsfryh!!!! MORE!!!

lolpkerlolpkerabout 10 years ago
AWESUMMM

I love your stories, keep it up! ;)

LiterKnightLiterKnightabout 10 years ago
Excellent

It's good to have a continuation to the story. Good work. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
OMG

FALLEN ARCHANGEL NEEDS TO BE HAPPENING SOON!!! Pls pls pls pls pls

-Lucifer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
GREAT

Love it and can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story

One criticism I have is that I think we're getting kinda a skewed view of the angels. I mean, literally every single angel we've met so far is more or less a match for a pillar of lust. I'm assuming that these guys are all elite or high ranking and that the average angel is in line with the average demon but it would probably be a good idea to mention that explicitly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Absolutely loved it , can't wait for the next chapter and hope we see another fallen angel join Rainer

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
up n up

plot thickens :)

TheTaskTheTaskabout 8 years agoAuthor

How the fuck does this random chapter of an unfinished story of mine make its way to the top of the nonhuman category rankings? Question for the ages.

Animefan2929Animefan2929almost 8 years ago
DON'T STOP

Plz it's been forever! Keep goin, I'm a big fan!

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