All Comments on 'The Lunar Life Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please longer

I'm dying here this story is so cute. I just Wish it was longer like at least full 3 to 4 pages. I know I'm being a little greedy but I can't help it. Your story is so amazing I can't wait everyday for a new chapter 😫 but still great work and keep up with it

musicfreakmusicfreakabout 9 years agoAuthor
4.92 rating? What!?

Sorry, let me geek out a little here because I have never gotten a rating that high before. I know it's short lived and will probably drop soon but let me enjoy this for a moment. Whoop!

Okay I'm done. Anyway, as for the length. I swear if I could I would combine chapters to make them longer, but they are already submitted so nothing much I can do about that right now.

Yeah this comment was just so I could geek out. Lol. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best Story

This is the best story on this site. It speaks my imagination .

baikalisanbaikalisanabout 9 years ago
Like the rest

I think this story is very good😍. I can't wait till more is posted. Thanks for posting daily. Makes it less aggravating to deal with short chapters 😜

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Geeking out is all good

It's a good story so we're just showing our appreciation. Can't wait for the next chapter! :) It's getting really interesting

erotikpassionserotikpassionsabout 9 years ago
I Love

Pace unhurried characters well developed, story well written and the style simple and easy. Am loving the way this is happening and am enjoying reading it a huge lot.

Tom7JerryTom7Jerryabout 9 years ago
Awesome

Super awesome!! *sigh* poor Will and Thane! Looking forward to more.

TM

musicfreakmusicfreakabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I seriously sound like a broken record again because I am always saying thank you to you guys. Haha.

Well, as expected, the rating has finally gone down from the unbelievable 4.92 (but that's okay). I'm not even the least bit embarrassed I geeked out. Lol. I mean we have to look at the little things in life and be happy about it right?

Anyway, back on track. Really happy you guys are enjoying it and the next chapter will be up in a few hours. I think you'll like the next chapter too. (Hint hint)

aclassyladyaclassyladyabout 9 years ago
better and better

your story gets better with each chapter. Not every story has to be filled with sex sex sex. This is a true love story that is building to a good climatic conclusion. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
loving steve

he's a character on his own More of Steve

StillnessIsTheTruthStillnessIsTheTruthabout 9 years ago
LAWDness

They are so adorable and ting!!!! But seriously, Steve is the man!!!! Favorite character so far!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well Written

The robot kind of reminds me of C-P30. That made me smile.

Anonymous
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