All Comments on 'The Magic Water'

And probably belonged in Sci/Fi. UGH!

Welcome to the site. Fun first effort, good pacing, and you edited well. Keep posting, you're on the right track to greatness.

How does it belong in Sci/Fi?

Anyways really hot story, looking forward to seeing more from you.

prolonged and constant use of magic water will result in permanent shemaleness. user discretion is not advised. please recycle :P

love to read more on this

Please write a sequel to this story.

Make it so they actually fuck each other

Very hot for your first try. :)

You should make a sequel. And a hotter one, making them hermaphrodites, like when drinking that water they grew dicks forever and they don't lose their pussies and uterus. So then they can have both reproductive organs and both can get the other pregnant.

johnnysoda please deliver us from evil

I enjoyed the story i am a guy and i would love to have a pussy and tits for a day so i could play with my self all day i could finger fuck my self . You are awesomeJ