All Comments on 'The Maharani Pt. 04'

Enjoying your story. Would like to see Parvati have more sex as she did in chapter 3. The sex in this story should only be involved with her. Would like to see her with more men. A different lover or lovers for each day.She needs a harem of men. The Queen's days and nights should be filled with pleasure.

Forget the loser who wrote the previous comment.

Great Story

Paragon you have such a poignant style of writing. Your veristic descriptions and flow of story is quite commendable. This is quite frankly a veracious and meticulous piece of work.

"EPIC STORY"

You should write more.

this is my second reading , i first read this story in 2006/7 , then visited INDIA four times , and have visited many of the places mention in the story . the 2nd read is a better one as i can relate to some of the places in the story .

well done !

What an EPIC! you should write more historical fiction like this!

It's a very erotic historical story of an extremely beautiful and sexy widow queen, Rani Parvati, and her attempts to get herself impregnated.

we want more of these chapters