All Comments on 'The Maid'

by hisemerald

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
don87654don87654almost 20 years ago
Good, but could have been better...

I gave you a '75' out of a possible '100'. This story needs to be continued, with the maid continuing to be fucked by Jamie, even after his wife returns home. They might fuck without regards to her being fertile or not, until after it is too late, at which time he secretly marries her so that she and the baby can continue to be in his home, all the while that he and the maid even start their own family, on the sly of course, with his wife not knowing any different..the babies being attributed to the maid dating someone else on her time off.

hisemeraldhisemeraldalmost 20 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Well thank you very much for the suggestion. I have been looking for a plot for the second part for some time now. Obviously it needs to be continued but I wasn't sure how to go about it.

Just one qestion: If Jamie is already married to Jeanine, how does he marry Catherine?

Now you've got my brain churning again for this story! Thanks!

catie

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous