All Comments on 'The Maid Returns'

well worth waiting for, thank you very much for again sharing your awesome talents as a writer and it was good to visit this story again, i do hope you will continue along the lines of Mary and her adventures...possbily with her sister and the raising of the lil brother together? how did phillip take Mary leaving...will he search her out? what will happen next? will Jack hear of Marys return and also search her out..??? Can't wait to see whats next...(hopefully)?*smile* Thanks again for allowing us to read you and please please don't make us wait so long...we do so love this story. Also thank you for the email on this upcoming story it was very thoughtful to send out. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

Well maybe I'm too soft hearted, but it seemed to me that Betty was the one who took advantage by integrating herself into Jack and Mary's life. Mary was still too young and needed to find herself. And now Betty has got her husband and her son. What a sad story.

Another cracker, with more hot sex than you can poke a stick at, more variety than in a box of Thornton’s Continentals.

Great stuff, loved Thomas Philip and Mary's last stand.

All capped by a rather poignant ending - so get any wanking out of the way before the ending has you shedding tears for the delightful Mary.

Mary's too compelling a character to end her story this way. Is Philip really to blame? Why this strange morality play in an otherwise great story. Lust is a sufficient motive and the added sin of incest only adds spice. Sad to see conventional morality intrude into the idyllic world of Mary-Philip-Victoria. The two daughters did not even give their dad a loving double blowjob yet...come on!! ;->

I have enjoyed all you've written: Mary's sexual adventures with Phillip, her enjoyment of Thomas and Phillip together, her time with Jack, Betsy, and Victoria, and her return to Phillip. I cannot believe that you'll leave off at this pivotal point of her life. Please don't let this be the end. Finish it, whether it be satisfying or heartbreaking. You're a great story teller, vivid and imaginative. Thank you.

Somehow finish it please!

Settle them, you can't leave Mary on the roadside with a baby in her womb!

Please!

John

Oh please don't finish it there. There are too many questions left unanswered. You truly have a great talent.

After reading all about Mary's adventures. Your ending was perfect. Thank you for the entertainment.

auto 1 star, dumped