All Comments on 'The Making of a Kingpin Ch. 01'

reminds me of a story by markydaysaid

what a story!! cant wait for the next chapter, when is the next one?

.........amazing writer

really hot. Love it whenever the jock wins!

What happened to her broken leg? And a strong, dominant woman just got magic cock syndrome? Did he drug her ro something? The change seemed too quick.

Can't wait to see what happens next,please continue.

Fantasy yes,reality no.....no women,not even a nymphomaniac folds this quickly....no matter the size of the cock or how it is used....sure sex can be used as a weapon to induce submission but not as quickly as this story implies....that being said the story itself was written nicely...keep up the fantasy...:)

School Conquering Stud. Teacher and STUDent are slightly different physically, but the seduction premises are pretty much the same: teacher visits football student's filthy home, teacher initially beats student, student plays possum and overcomes teacher, teacher submits completely to student's cock. This one's hotter IMO, because the teacher happens to be an undercover cop.

Don't listen to the hate, it was a really good story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Way too fast for my liking with the submission.

I don't like the idea of a grown woman submitting to a teen like that. Women just don't submit to anyone because of the size of their cock. Get real.

I skipped ahead from the 2nd paragraph to write this: As soon as you mentioned "double f breasts", the whole story become worthless. Use some common sense in the future.

This is bomb.

Playing silly buggers, are we?