All Comments on 'The Making of a Kingpin Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story, good writing.

I like this a lot. There's a plot that thickens, as they say, and there's a lot of hotness and passion along the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome sto-- waaaait a minute...

Hold on; power-hungry, ruthless, manipulating, next to no social competence and a complete lack of inhibition? Well, looks like we've got a grade-A sociopath on our hands...

Really good story, though, always liked stories with internal monologues where you slowly see characters revert to fuck-hungry whores, good work!

LunkyLunkyover 9 years ago

Loving this series

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