All Comments on 'The Making of Daddy's Slut Ch. 05'

The beginning was kind of thin but the mid and last sections were some of the most erotic lit I have ever read.Nicky should have had more of a background, or at least a inkiling at leaning toward dom/sub lifestyle.But those few things aside it was a great story

very nice wish i had been at such a party

I enjoyed the story, but you didn't do enough to describe Nicky. We don't really get a good sense of how she looked in this story.You should have given us a little more background info on her.

I've always wanted a Daddy like that. Of course, I couldn't have my actual father, since he's dead, but a Master who would be my Daddy? It makes me so wet thinking about it.