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All Comments on 'The Man at Langley Manor'

by sandgoseek

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

a great story, but I find the end feels a bit rushed.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

Perfect story up until the end. You don’t abandon a submissive for 9 months of the year. The ending was wholly inappropriate, and quite a disappointment.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

Big fail at the end. You should research your Dom info a little more thoroughly. Went from a 5 to a very solid 2.

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just came back to lit after a long long break, im older now than i was then so the writing has changed significantly, but i think the old stuff is fun in a quaint like "i remember writing that" kinda way. ive always done this for fun, i used to write much more serious pieces o...