All Comments on 'The Man Who would be Queen Ch. 14'

So nice to see this story finally has another chapter. A bit of editing would have helped with the few spelling, grammatical, and plot inconsistencies.

Nonetheless, a good return to this storyline and I hope for more the near future. Erotica is nice, but character development and an emerging plot line are what makes a story great!

Was also "fun" to read Angela's change of heart regarding Dexter if indeed he is to become royalty. Less believable was Dexters sudden acceptance at this revelation. It will be interesting to see how his attitude develops has his appearance and gender are changed.

anymore to this story? there should be another chapter to where he is saved and the the so called queen is executed