All Comments on 'The Marine & The Beauty Queen Ch. 01'

nice start, but I wonder where you are headed. seems like wrong category

Romance? Is this a really long drawn out story before you get to the point? starts with a cheating wife....

I am liking it so far....but i would love to know where you are headed :)

So far, right now since I don't know the whole story it seems like this is gonna be a RAAC story

Yes, this is a long build-up. In fact, there is no actual sex until Chapter 3. I have submitted the entire series to Literoticia, and am waiting for approval on the remaining chapters. I hope that once you have read the entire story, you will think that Romance is correct category. By the way, what is RAAC story? I am not familiar with that.

Nice story.......looking forward to it

Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapters.

It's what wimp cuckolds do. They take back their cheating whore of a wife no matter what she's done.

Abrams tanks weigh upwards of 60 tons. Maybe you got the aluminum version.

So far an enjoyable story, with a fairly simple plotline

Reconciliation or Btb

Let's give the author a chance before going off half cocked

If it wasn't for the beginning I would say this is a very interesting start. Since we already know she is a cheating skank whore slut wife my perspective has been established. Now we need to know how it started. And why. I'll continue...

half-cock is the best bebylo and the rest of the trolls can do.

Sex can improve a story. Too much sex will destroy a story.

Corpus Christi NAS does not have a hospital and, even if it did, it would be ridiculous to think they would transfer a patient from one of the largest U.S. military posts in the world to a small outpost like Corpus for treatment. Also, anyone who knows Texas military knows that if an injury is serious enough to be airlifted, you would go to the Military Medical Center in San Antonio.

I admit it would not matter to most readers who do not know this, but if you are going to use actual place names you should do a little research. It is very distracting.

This ends as a cheating wife, RAAC story. Be warned.

Can't stand raac, damn I like all his other stories!

Great start. RAAC is not a problem if the circumstances justify the result. 5 stars

I enjoyed this story yet I do have one question. Drill Sergeants? Really Sarge? Since when do we have Dill Sergeants in the Corps? As far as I know we have never had Drill Sergeants we have always had Drill Instructors in our 246 year history. I know that may not seem like a big deal to civilians but to Marines it is a very big deal. Drill Sergeants are Army which stands for Aren't Ready for the Marines Yet.