by OldSarge69
Why, Susan why? Nothing in this tale indicates she had a reason to cheat. We'll see...
I really enjoy your writing style it flows very well and the story so far has been a terrific read. Can't wait to see where you take the tale from here
Thank you. I have really enjoyed this story. Just in case this is not the end I shall take a look occasionally for a continuation.
"Stretch"
2 folks in that much love, hard to believe she would hurt him like that. still wondering where you are headed. thanks
Failry nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing where things go from here.
I can see you're going to have him wimp out and accept her as a cheating slut with the pastor no less!
I will reserve judgment until the last chapter, but the way you wrote Susan, it would seem impossible for her to cheat. Yet she is sucking off the pastors dick. I cannot see a reconcile, but after reading your own comments defending her, that is exactly what is going to happen. As much as he put her on a pedestal, and her subsequent betrayal of him and his marine honor code above all else, I cannot see a reconcile for she truly dishonored and disrespected him. Especially taking the pastors side in the first chapter. For him to take her back would make him a wimp not a marine.
But I will reserve judgment.