All Comments on 'The Massage'

You are writing erotica and you can't keep genders correct!? So sad.

I will let you find your mistake.

I was going to tell you the mistake, but yes, it's better if you figure it out for yourself. Hints: lots of massage stories have the same mistake. And it's near the beginning of the story.

Fix it and repost. There are instructions <somewhere> on this site telling you how to make corrections.

masseur = male massage professional

masseuse = female massage professional

Good story, I liked the humorous twist at the end, and I liked the way you told the story. I give great massage, but it turns out I can't write it as well - I shall definitely be using this for reference.

Shame God had to kill that kitten for the Masseuse/Masseur mix up - Just as a matter of interest - did this story start off with a girl giving the massage?

Hi Bert_Fegg. No, it was always a man, just a simple mix-up. I am resubmitting tonight to straighten it out. Glad you liked it, more stories on the way when I get time.