All Comments on 'The Massage Gambit'

Good story!

Passionate ... super and everyone agreed!!

I believe you are wrong. I am a reader of stories and NOT a literature critic !!

I am asked if I like or hate your story, not your writing abilties.

Anyway : a good story !

you would put it in a different and more honest category you would get

the ratings you feel you deserve .

you say

" Foreword: Dear Reader, this is a story about wife sharing and/or the "voyeur hubby" syndrome. While some "Loving Wives" tales are about a committed, monogamous relationship, most are about the erotic nature of opening a marriage, infidelity, or some other variation – which are not "pure." This story also contains some bi-sexual exploration. So if any of these offends you, please do not bother to read this story – there are hundreds of others for you – and for heaven's

sakes, don't vote. Voting on Literotica should be based on literary quality and erotic appeal, not moralization! "

That is bullshit !!!!!! you state that this story content is clearly a Fetish / Group sex story and actually not for LW. You admit , LW readers dont like wimp/cuck/swinger stories but yet you insist on putting it here !

Its like somebody writing a story about why they hate Niggers and putting it in IR . You tell us not to vote , again thats bullshit ! Readers have a right to vote , if you dont want the negative ones , put it in the correct category then . You get 1 star .

she still gets fucked everyday, and brings home hot creampies. He feels guilty about it and can't accept the fact deep down in his heart he loves it. You have my condolences. Now his gay bud B.A.W will come for his lover.

Very believable.... Thanks for a great story.

Imaginative, and clearly focused on the relationship between the husband and wife and their long, slow approach toward this scene.

Of course, Mongo's obsession will surface here. Wow, is he deluded! He even thinks that in the preface, Stoneylodge agrees with him: "That is bullshit !!!!!! you state that this story content is clearly a Fetish / Group sex story and actually not for LW. You admit , LW readers dont like wimp/cuck/swinger stories ..."k

Mongo - Stoneylodge doesn't say ANY of that, dude! He said, rather, that this is a loving wives story, that most loving wives stories include some less-than-conventional take on sex and marriage, and that if you don't like it, you don't have to read it.

Then, Stoneylodge went to the additional trouble of adding tags to help protect the soft-minded who get all twitchy when they read Loving Wives stories that don't fit their personal preferences.

Mongo, of course, can't help showing that his bigotry is pretty much boundless by using the "N-word" ... Mongo, friend, there are so many medications and treatment modalities out there ... start trying them.

This gets at least three points, but also gets an extra point or two for pissing off the whiners.

I loved this story. I could just imagine my wife in that situation. Thanks!

1) This story definitely belongs under "Loving Wives" which is where most such "voyeur hubby" stories appear. It might go under some others but this is the best spot as far as I am concerned. In addition, it is not a "fetish" story. For the record, I did not agree with anything Mongo says lol. I think he read a different story. Clearly, he does not understand the scope of the "Loving Wives" genre.

2) With regard to voting, my point is that if you do not approve of extramarital sex and only want to read about monogamy, then don't read or find fault with the premise with a negative vote. I have given my approval to have my stories voted upon (and I have that perogative for those who don't know). I just hate to see a vote which pulls down the average posted by those who moralize or disapprove and should not bother to read this type of story or perhaps even visit Literotica in the first place. If you like the notion, then it should come down to whether the story appealed and turned you on -- and if so, how well? Thanks for all the rest who have expressed positive feedback! -- Stoney

move on

A stright man wanting or liking this, I tried to understand and get into this but it was a complete turn off for me. I don't know anybody like this, where do you people come from?

I'd never do anything even close to this, but it's a great fantasy.

Some people lack imagination - pay them no mind. Hope you write LOTS more wife stories.

wow! im actually very wet right now. your story makes me want get a massage with a happy ending as well. maybe itll even lead to a threesome like ur characters did.

You know , it is actually quite frightening to realize , how many people in todays society will accept the validity of a random rant on a web site from a person they have and never will meet , do not and never will know , or even if the poster is who they claim to be , as fact . Without any verification of any kind whatsoever . The more erratic " Mongo " is , the more people believe he is real , even after giving a hint to the fact on "his" bio . Absolutely astounding . People wonder why internet crime is so pervasive . Accept only those things and people who are around you in your daily lives as real . This has been great entertainment but also a bit sad when it is realized how impersonal our society has become .

would love to try this

Would always love to lick another man's wife pussy and also see my wife blowing another stud.

This has to be every mans fantasy, a well writen story and very believable.

I hope you have a follow up story or more stories like this to add.

Loved it!! Very arousing and well written.

OMG...that was soooooo hot. Would love to have tha type of massage and glorious fucking afterwards!!! Totally made my pussy wet

And very similar to many of my own experiences.

luv'd this story - had me stroking the entire time!

I usually skip to the sex, but your story was so well written I readit all! Well done

I found this story to be way beyond what I had imagine. This is a very good story. Easy to read and when my wife saw what I was reading she got into reading it also.

I hope you write more, this being the 2nd story I read of yours, I find them both very good.

I thought Jay was going to really massage her tight little hole when he got her doggy style. Maybe, the next time.

Great story, great build up.A

Literotica.com's definition of "Loving Wives"

For anyone who, like the last commenter, believes this story belongs elsewhere, check out what Literotica.com states vis a vis what belongs under "Loving Wives" which should clarify this question once and for all regardless of preconceived notions:

"Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more."

Note: this includes SHARING! So please grant all due consideration when voting!

Great story. Very arousing. I wish my hubby would let me do that. Enjoyed reading every word.

Both my wife and I loved this story and the author had us believing every move hubby made to satisfy his fantasy. Hope to read more from this author, very erotic, well done.

One of the things I liked about this story is the fact you didn't feel the need for either man to ass fuck her. I find to often these storys have fingering, followed by some pussy eating, then penitration, & ass mounting. Most of the time the ass fucking part is superfluous & not needed to fill the story out.

Well written story thank you.

An amazing story which I found extremely erotic and thought provoking. Thanks...I loved it!!!

Nice to see a believable and well-written story.

I like having my body manipulated by a hard bodied guy with a big cock. Xoxoxo Annette

Very well written. Realistic descriptions of characters without exaggeration. Loved it. Happened to me on vacation. He was Jamaican and it was so good. Got it 3 times but he stayed the third night. Thanks for the memories.

Another of old Stony’s cuck and whore stories to laugh at.

Perfect Hot Wife

Beautiful!

All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Women must understand nearly all women 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage.

It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly.

Love the butt streching Mandy was treated. I cannot imagine how a girl could not feel her buttocks pulled apart, and not be utterly delighted -ravished- by the undeniable gaping it induced in her butthole and pubes. I would have burst cumming in the spot!! Loved it