All Comments on 'The Matinee Idol'

by Samuelx

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Lance_AuralLance_Auralabout 18 years ago
No conflict yet

I liked the characters & the situation but you haven't established a conflict to resolve yet. I don't see where you're going with this.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...