All Comments on 'The Memories of Trees Ch. 04-05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You're going to dash us, aren't you?

I see this as the second part to a tragedy. Am I right?

This is like a retelling of the Prometheus legend: Your boy Collin stole the knowledge of a virus cure from the Gods and gave it unto the hands of man. And then killed half the planet.

Cute. I'm giving this a big rating because it's engaging so far, but be careful you don't make your protagonist too whiney. That is a real turn off, especially for these readers investing their time with you without sex in the story.

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