All Comments on 'The MILF'

Hey, I loved it you have a gift for painting pictures with words. I think you will go far as a writer, best wishes.

I really enjoyed this, nice story with vivid sex!

Great job!

Excellent story. Great use of descriptive illustrations. Excellent use of self narrartion, one could actualluy feel the desire within the characters. Very well laid out story. Very good character development for a short story without taking from the erotic tone. The only negative thing I can think of is, why did none of this ever happen to me.

Very well written indeed! Look forward to reading more!!