All Comments on 'The Mirror'

That is one wicked imagination you have!

Very nicely done.

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Good story, but i dont really fully u derstand it. Who, or what, is jack? Where did he come from? How could he affect her ohysically from inside a mirror? What about the old ugly lady who sold them the mirror? How was she important? Ad if she wasnt important why was she included? So many unawnsered questions.

I thought the story needed a little more "filling out". Where did the mirror come from? Was the old woman a witch? Does the old woman know what the mirror is? etc, etc... The story overall is really good but maybe a re-write?

love your imagination, and mysteriousness...kudos!