All Comments on 'The Misogynist Ch. 01'

Please edit your work, nothing is more distracting than numerous spelling errors. If nothing else please use spell check.

Dear A: I rechecked this story's first chapter. I'm not at all certain what you're talking about. I found no incorrectly spelled words. Perhaps if you are English, Australian, Tasmanian, or anyone of that genre of English speaking people you do not understand there are a few differences in spelling in American English. For example the English spelling of center is centre, and so on. You have to adapt, as we in America have learned, without rancor, to adapt. Then again, perhaps you just just don't know how to spell. If that's the case I suggest you purchase a Dictionary. Keep it beside you when reading. Then you'll be able to discern your own errors before correcting another. I won't be responding to any more anonymous comments. You have a name, or perhaps an on line identity. I'd like you to read the chapter again. Indicate the words you think are incorrectly spelled. I doubt that you will, but if you do use my e-mail so no one will laugh at you. Respectfully, carvohi

Holy crap. What a creep Turner is. I hope he gets what is coming to him.

Most stories on literotica seem to be written by illiterate people who at best try to sound smart, but you have the opposite problem. Harvard grads with an english major are not likely to be reading this, so simplify it a little. For the average reader, trying to read everything before turner and cheryl meet will likely put them into a coma.

In regards to the comment that there was "too much intro..."

The grammar and vocabulary in most stories on here make me cringe. Not everyone wants a simple story that a kid in middle school could have written. I appreciate intelligent writing. And no, I did not attend Harvard. So it offends me when some suggests that a story should be "dumbed down." If you can't understand it or it bores you, move on or at least admit that the words are "too big" for you.

In my opinion, you posted your comment in an attempt to be perceived as intelligent. I'm sure your thought process was something like "hey, if I point out that this was written with 'big boy words' then everyone will see me as smart." Wrong. Do you even know what a misogynist is?

carvohi, sorry for the rant. But I'm enjoying your story so far, and I found that comment offensive to people that like to read real stories. Can't wait to read the rest.