All Comments on 'The Mist of Time Ch. 01'

It is a good start, but it is so short.

Another page and I would have a good feel for it.

I had to chuckle at your intro to this story "I you want reality? Go read a newspaper." On this side of the pond most news is fairytales spit out be socialists liberals. Any way I do enjoy stories from your country as they always have a different environment to them, be it landscape, language, and even sometimes food. All these differences seem to enhance the story and cause me to stop and look things up for my own edification.

Good to see Chad and Lilly again... I love your shady characters.

need only read another of this authors very good stories.

I will say only that the image is etched in my memory.

When a foul mouth makes a comment like that, they aren't man or woman enough to sign their name

Bill

looking forward to seeing where we go from here.

I have to make a preemptive comment regarding your forward.

You said, "You want reality? Go read a newspaper."

...In what universe can you find reality in a newspaper?

Lol. Just playing.

My mom had a auntie Flo. But she said she only showed up once a month.😁🤣😅😂

Loved it. Keep on writing please

Enjoyed this, I’d forgotten that I’d read this before, so fingers crossed for enjoying it a second time around. 🤞