All Comments on 'The Model'

by MemoryHeap

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bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago
HOT

Hot and well written. The only problem I had (and maybe I missed it) was no background on her sub side. If she had no knowledge of it being part of her, she should have at least expressed shock at submitting or reluctance. Not just some confused fog she doesn't combat. Still a good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing!

Fantastic, well written story. I am a photographer and I would love to have a model like her!

DiannahDiannahalmost 10 years ago
5 stars

I think I would have put this under the exhibitionism category, but that's a minor complaint. Outstanding story, and lots of fun too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brilliant Story

Very erotic; very interesting; edge of the seat stuff. Thank You for Sharing Memory Heap.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Turned ME on!

I'd love to be used like that! More please?

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