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by HoneysLustfulDreams

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bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Wow, so good and hot

PrfsrPrfsralmost 10 years ago
Tense

Started out in past tense, changed to present tense.

HoneysLustfulDreamsHoneysLustfulDreamsalmost 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the constructive criticism Prfsr. I noticed it myself after I had submitted it. :) Something I will have to be aware of and correct in future submissions.

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