All Comments on 'The Music of the Mind Ch. 05'

The story is coming along nicely, and the charaters are well developed. The main charater is a bit unbelievable though, seeing as he always acts almost perfectly and openly admits all of his faults as soon as he sees them. You have done a nice job with the suspense, and leave the reader questioning just what will happen next.

Well done.

I appreciate the level of involvement in this story. I find it refreshing to read a story in which someone is trying to be upright and do good. Sometimes however, the main character knows too quickly about the possible downsides of his own actions.

I find it refreshing to find a tale with a sprinkling of sex and a great store base.

And my initial impression of the story it’s getting better and better with some nice believable character development and good old fashion surprises

Was reading Three Square meals in science fiction and had a referral to your story this is a nice little story to read while I'm waiting for the next chapter in to other story this is a very pleasant interlude thank you