All Comments on 'The Mystic Adventure Ch. 03'

even powdery sand is irritating, but perhaps not until later...

Suspend disbelief for a second to the few who could not get past the sand. The rest of it I can only describe as amazing the story was so visualy graphic my imagination was going nuts! Please write more and soon.

Gray

ps I also understand the sexuality of people being familier with each other which makes the story even hotter!

I cannot tell you how much I have enjoyed reading this series. Your mastery of storytelling makes for a sensuous, romantic ride through the lives of your characters. Good luck to you wherever you are, but please continue the story! Thanks again!

Great stuff! thanks for writing- really hot with excellent characters. I love it! More please :-)

This was a great read, PLEASE continue the story and publish on here asap please! Love the characters, the story, how well its written.

Great story keep it up! :)

cheers!

there are only five stars I can award to your story. I can't think of a better fantasy than screwing two beautiful chicks on a deserted Caribbean beach. And there's more--on to Chapter 4. Truly an amazing story.

great story 2 gorgeous ladies on a sailboat with me I'm with ya look at you go bro well done! please don't stop telling this story a chapter for every 1 of the 10days.

I love how it's not just an erotic story, but you've incorporated feelings and a little romance. you had me hooked from the first paragraph. you should write an actual book!

What anonymous below said, this is FANTASTIC!!!

Would love to be up to my balls and tonsils in these two lush cunts, getting drunk on their cunt juice. Cunt crazed sex maniac uk.

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