All Comments on 'The Neighbor's Naughty Daughter'

Probably an unlikely pickup and neighborly situation, but the story was an erotic fantasy and sparked dreams of a fun adventure with lasting effects. As I am reading all of your stories from top to bottom, I am closing in on the end and notice that your stories are slowly becoming fewer and fewer. Hope that doesn’t mean you are ill, but only because of a lack of time to compose more. Looking forward to a new surge of eroticism.

Sometimes, the best of things have always been right in front of our eyes.

Great job! Really enjoyed that. Really liked Model Sister and Daddy's bed. These are the only three so far. Going to keep going. Nice work!

Just OUTSTANDING! I made a mess

This really killed me...wow! So hot..

Amazing! I want to fuck two beautiful women like that. God damn that was one hell of a fuck session..

There is more truth than fiction in this sexy story. When I graduated high school, where I had been thoroughly fucked all four years, I started college in the summer, two weeks after graduating. That first weekend at the college, there was a meet and greet the faculty. I went, dressed as my usual slutty self…no panties, no bra. There was booze and food and a lot of interaction. A young professor and his wife, both in their late 30s came over and started talking. She was drop death beautiful and he was handsome.

To make this quick, they took me home and we had an awesome threesome…all weekend long. They loved my 34D tits, hot cunt, perky ass, and my lips sucking on her tits and cunt and his 6” cock. So when my schedule was finalized, I had him Mon and Wed, last class of the day, and her Tues and Thurs, also last class of the day. Needless to say that for the next 12 weeks, I got to have sex everyday, alternating with them. Then on Friday I would head over to their place, and we would fuck, suck, and cum all weekend.

On the last weekend before the fall semester began, I went to their place for out weekend of sexual pleasure, only to find them naked in bed and fucking with another “innocent” 18 year old whom they introduced me to as my replacement. They watched as I initiated her into the teachers stable of hot cunts. We stayed in bed fucking until Saturday noon. Then another married teacher couple came to the house. They came in the bedroom, gently took me out of the bed, dressed me, and took me to their home. I became their after class delight and weekend slut. This happened every semester until I graduated…and I went walking on stage to get my diploma with three different loads of cum running down my legs….sex is not only great, but educational too!

Man you write the hottest most well-crafted stories.

Loved every word of it. A second part would really be nice.

Good fantasy. liked it. 4 stars. Sounds fun. Have never had a MFF threesome. Have fantasized about them. Most times MMF threesomes. I will say it read a little long, maybe 3 pages not 5. Good conclusion. No one gets hurt. Can keep this story line going; Jenna may invite a friend (F or M) over the next time.

Been there - Done that, but your story was way sexier. Thanks!

Good premise.

Sex somewhat rushed. Needed more deliberate teasing.

And an editor/proofreader needed. Among other things, you used BAITED breath when the correct word is BATED.

Four stars.

I think a part 2 is order lol nice work

Great story, well written as well…

Took me back to a very similar episode that my wife and I enjoyed once on a cruise….

Great story

Very enjoyable. I will be reading more of your work.

This was hot. What a great read

FUCKING HOT

I'm very satisfied at the moment, even if she was the redhead I would still be very satisfied.

Thanks

Nicely done.

Love the way you write. Very hot stuff and a fantasy of many of us.

Just reread this, excellent the 2nd time as well! Good job!

Awesome fantasy !!! Loved it.

OMG bloody awesome, so well written and what a delightful story. Soooooooo damm hot.

Thank you for writing this.

Jennifer

Fuck that was hot!!

Super smoking hot, I mean damn

Hot hot hot

Being a female who enjoyed growing up in the under 21 clubs, a group of us liked to be hit on y older women who were searching for sex objects. It went both ways!

Great story, even though I knew that they would meet their sweet neighbor girl at the club. Very hot!

Thanks for sharing.

this was a great story you should do a follow up, you missing an opportunity to a follow up great story if you don't

Loved the story especially the tension and interplay of the bar pickup scenes. Characters had some depth which is hard in short story format.

For those who chose not to do what Southern children are taught and keep their mouth shut unless something good comes out, if you don’t like the proofing done on on this site VOLUNTEER to proofread!!! Send a PM offering your services. All my career I was required to prepare written documents for a variety of purposes. The hardest thing for the author is to read the actual words on the paper and not the ones as they were developed and thought to be transcribed. I did it frequently. Someone without knowledge of the narrative can see the glitches easier. So offer to help.

Irks me to see those comments in public when there are better mechanisms available to offer constructive criticism to the story author. All those abusive words to say you have trouble reading. Maybe you should look elsewhere for reading material.

Beautiful story

. I wish Becca was also in the action. Please do a follow up

follow small breasts with BUT???

Example: "Her perky tits were small, but well shaped, it should be: Her perky tits were small, AND well shaped.

I LOVE small tits. B cups are great, as are A cups and C cups. The smaller ones are MUCH MORE sensitive. I dated a beautiful Eurasian woman for about four years {until her husband was transferred out of state}. She was the most fantastic woman I ever knew. She would have multiple orgasms just from my attention to her small A size chest- which her husband never did. At 44, she had the finest ass in captivity, AND she had never done oral sex- neither giving nor receiving. The first time I went down on her, I didn't think she would ever quit cumming. As she pushed my face away from her crotch, she passed out for a few minutes. After that, the first thing she did, when we got together, was sit on my face, or she would suck me to climax before climbing on my face- I think she orgasmed herself when I filled her mouth with cum.

Fucking hot and well described. It's not easy to lead the reader from one position to another without losing where you are. This is a story to keep in favorites.

When an author solicits feedback, "both good and bad," he or she is asking for help to improve the product. This is good for everyone, providers and consumers alike.

I enjoy the erotica on this site and can hardly imagine the amount of work that goes into a ten thousand word story. But I can help proofread a story to make it better when asked.

Before you complain about the proofreading, editing, or other faucets of a authors story. Consider that we as the readers are very fortunate to have the opportunity to read these stories that each author spends their time and energy to write and share with us! Don't forget the fact that these are free stories! These authors don't have a staff of proofreaders, editors, etc. If you think you can do better, then post your story!!

Nice erotic story

to do ANY Proof Reading???

Example of a rubbish sentence - "Even better, the first heat wave of the season had caused inspired the club had to open up its beachfront a week early."

Gobble-de-gook! Rubbish!!

What a great story. Love the fact your other half is on the same wave length as you. It is all so effing hot and realistic. I hope there is more to cum. Thanks for the great story.

Keep writing. For the love of the game, keep writing!!!

lived it in my mind thinking of my former young neighbor used to tease me!

Sexy and hot...

What a fantasy to have if it could be 'lived out'... smiles

Thanks for the passionate, hot story.

'Automated editors used on this site'

Wha? When did Lit start using an automated editor? Seems to me, IF they used an editor on the stories, some of them wouldn't be complete abominations... grammatically, that is.

There would also be consistency. If there is ONE truism at Lit, the stories on not consistent, on any level. LOL

GeoD

well done lc68, but still grammar glitches.....must be the automated editors they use at this site

Omg,would love to be part of this romance ,,licks to all three ,,yummy

OMG

We found it absolutely awesome!, my wife and I haven't come so hard in a while after reading this together!.

Read like a true experience. Had a similar experience many years ago with 2 women friends and I was in my early twenties and we came many times in a 12 hour session. Best experience ever. I was scared until we started to play. I thought it was a potential to get hurt or robbed. Fortunately my cock has always been in charge of my emotional responses.

well written, and hope you win.

To the max!

Loved it, so it needs 5 Stars.

Well deserved.

I really enjoyed reading it. I think that it might have been 1 page to long. but other than that thumbs up!!! when I read this it made me think of my own fantasy would you please write another one for me?

I WAS TO SORE TO FINISH THE STORY. BY THE END OF THE THIRD PAGE I CAME TOO MANY TIMES. REALLY WISH TO MEET YOU, MY WIFE AND I ARE ON THE SAME PAGE. GREAT STORY

All of

F your stories are very, very hot, I hope you keep writing!

This was written a while ago, and I would like to see if you have an update to the story!

Loved this story, can't understand why the anon comments that are just abusive and out of order are left on here. If this is considered not a hot story, then the hater must not have a pulse.

Keep up this theme, you have delightful ideas, and I'd like to read more of this sort of experience or fantasy.

Adds a whole new dimension to "the girl next door".

Although, the forty-something couple were indeed "creepy" for trawling at an under-21 club. Most under-21 clubs, that I know of, wouldn't allow older people in.

This is an excellent story.

Your stories are so well written with well defined characters. I love the way you take the time to tell a complete story and build up to the action rather than just jumping straight to the main event.

Excellent story and very well written. I will add you to my favorite authors list and continue to read. THANK YOU for sharing your creativity!! Barry.

This is such a great read an something I want to do so badly. To experience all kinds of threesomes an it would be even better if I knew them. I think it makes it kinkier.

So hot! I came so much during this! This is a major fantasy of mine and I wish my bf would let us do this! It's gonna take a lot of begging probably! Haha

Wow. Brings vivid images in my minds eye.

Just so fun to read and imagine.

My compliments to the author. Wow.

I have cum so many times while reading this-amazing fantasy of mine too! Good work!

This is a huge fantasy of mine. Please add to it! I like that the young girl is so confident and sure. Super hot!

Keep the story going

More but make her an hermaphrodite.

Great story. The spelling and grammar need some work, though.

You should follow up the next story where the young girl brings in Becca too to bed room and a wild erotic dance first at the floor and then a orgy at the home

wooooow hot yarrrrrrrrrrr

I realise you like to build up towards the sexual encounters, and I enjoy reading about that just as much as the frantic, lust-driven action in the bedroom. My only observation - and it's a personal preference, not a criticism - is that the writing might be tightened a bit, especially in those early scenes. I have the same feeling about the structure of some of your other stories, all of which I've enjoyed.

I have read this story three times now, gives me the best hard on to jerk...keep it up...aah I just came all over my hands

nice n hot n sexy n got me all wet n bothered n horny. WOW!!!

Time to go jack off. That was hot as hell.

Very erotic, from the dancing at the bar all the way through. I would love to see a sequel, where Jenna tells Becca about everything she missed out on in the future maybe? Keep up the great work

Hi absolutely enjoy reading your stories ,so believable and very erotic. Dont stop writing ,loved it .

I dream about being a participant in a scenario like this. It is at the top of my bucket list. Well written and erotic story. Please keep writing more stories like this - KEEP "EM CUMMING!!!. You have a definite talent.

Don't let criticism and comments from anonymous losers get you down.

One of the worst.

A very hot and erotic story. Well done.

Well done

love the entire story line. would be great if they would get into role playing. perhaps have her parents get involved too. that would be so naughty!

This is something my wife and I want but don't have the courage. Would love to read about Becca, Jenna and Kim with Doug only being allowed to watch!

chasing the girls....

Loved this story...kind of partial to younger women myself! Just wish I had a neighbor like Jenna...! What a sweet ride... Looking for a follow-up story... You might like some of my older stories...!

That was one hell of a story! Omg I'm still slippery wet..

What a story, just loved it. Thanks for sharing it (A personal fantasy of mine also).

Loved this story; as a matter of fact this is my first comment ever (on Literotica 5+ years).

I'd like to see Jenna seduce Becca (the redhead) and get her back to her house; which would provide the opportunity to catch the neighbors in a little backyard play and of course lead into a threesome with Kim, then later possibly a 4-some, yummy!!

that was such a hot story. I hope that you make this into a series and right more naughty sexy adventures with this couple and their neighbor's extremely naughty daughter ;)

I thought it was really well thought out, especially with the build up, and the ending. I feel like the middle could have been a tad bit longer, maybe a scene leading up to the bedroom scene. Having said that it was a really great story and I definitely see how it got in the winners. Bravo :)

Well written with a teasing build up to the sex. A few errors but who cares except the anonymous assholes. I find the comments about the "older couple" to hysterical, at my age forty year olds are kids. Thanks for writing.

There were a few spelling and grammar issues. But, it had a nice build up and the sex was hot!

I heard the story winners are fixed and you proved it. Your writing is juvenile. Fucking the shit out of her is such a great expression. You use it alot. I guess that's why your stories are so full of shit. You can't write worth shit either.

I hope we get to hear more about their summer adventures

This has to be one of my favorite reads on this site. I don't usually comment on stories, but this one is worth commenting on! I and everyone else would love it if you continued this story!

Since Jenna definitely had girl on girl experience maybe in a part two when her parents take their next vacation they invite over her girlfriend for a foursome. Not sure I'd like to read about any young dudes joining the fun.

The expression is 'bated breath'.

You aren't fishing.

Great story and so well written. The build up was terrific and the story sailed along from there. Your characters weren't sleazy at all and yes, some young people do like to get it on with people older than themselves. Experience and expertise are a big turn on. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Yeah, dream that the little girls go with old farts...

I've never commented on a story in all the years I've been reading Literotica,but this one deserves the highest praise! Usually 2 or more pages get woefully dull and wordy, but not this one. Hooked on every word I actually read it again. Absolutely the best piece of work I've read here. The tease, the lead-in, the actual sex, wow! Keep going, please!

This is one of the best, if not the best, I have ever read on literotica. I think there should be followup stories of the next vacation by her parents

Nuf said!

It took me three times to get through it all, I came hard every time...