All Comments on 'The Neighbour's Daughter'

I can't believe you are first time writer. You are now one of my favorite and I hope to read many more from you and to read the continuation of this story also.

Now that's hot.

LOVE THIS MOST EROTIC STORY. THE NEIGHBOUR'S DAUGHTER.

WHAT A VERY SEXUAL START TO THIS INCREDIBLE RAUNCHY STORY.

DO HOPE YOU PLAN A MORE OF THIS MOST EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING.

Gemma. I assume you introduced Gemma into the equation just to prepare for future chapters. Well, when Kim's parents come home it'll be your opportunity. I look forward to it.

A few errors that a good proof-reading would have caught, but over all, a very intriguing read. Good level of build-up, although a bit weak when a climactic point is achieved. Nice job!

There is no way that this was written by a nugget, ( milspeak for a newbie ) no way at all. If, however, that's a true fact...I expect great things from you...just remember that the spellchecker is your friend!

If this is a genuine first story from a novice you blew my hair back. Good storyline, tittilating and erotic. You could have spun out your climaxes and build up and become more graphic. I am very impressed and look forward to next chapter

Loved it I want more and I want it now

Wow! I can just feel the oncoming mom/daughter Rose and Becky taboo tryst upcoming and I must say that this story has my motor running hot!

Add this to the stack of rave reviews by those who posted before me. This was a real treat. Glad there is more to come. I'll certainly be watching for it.

Good art takes you to a place. Great art seeps into you, and consumes you from the inside out in a delightfully insidios way. Ahhh! I have been consumed.

MsFork... nice to meet you.

Thanks for your new story. Enjoyed it very much. Keep writing.

Still waiting for Part Two. :D

Awesome story I would love for you to continue this series.

What an awesome tale...I don't think Rose will be able to stay away once Kim's parents return...and what about Gemma?

Fantastic story that is crying out for Part 2 (and beyond). The mother/daughter getting together, the daughter/neighbours daughter and then bringing in Gemma make it a mouthwatering possibility. Loved the descriptive passages of womanly love.

loved that story cant wait for part 2

Great story,more please

You must write more...this is very good. We need to find out what starts with Gem a (and other girls at work) and if Rose and her daughter start anything.....

when is part two coming rose at the office

Loved this story, well written and so hot. Seems that Kim could get Rose to do just about anything if she just demanded it. Maybe even going down on her daughter. Hmmmm. She could even begin to control Rose, there is no limit to future possibilities.

Keep going love it.....

I just loved your story. Love when a woman is awakened to the pleasures that only another woman can share wit her.

Hope Becky is next.

Can't believe you have not finished this. Your fans need more...

A truly wonderful story that must be continued to include friend at work and even daughter.

I feel like Oliver Twist.

More please?

..you just need to use an editor to tighten it up a bit. There were some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors that personally I find distracting. Don't take it wrongly, when I write I make mistakes and even when I've had it edited and proofed numerous times there may still be a silly error that everyone has missed. However, the aim is get it as right first time as you can. You write so well. Love the nonchalance of the mother, especially the refreshing dialogue with her daughter. If only more parent-child relationships were like that. I can see experimentation going further, including with both teens and the co-worker. To borrow that cliche, the dam has burst!!

Nice erotic story of an eye opening sexual encounter and life change for a lady. It still perplexes me how Brits will call panties by different names, i.e., underwear, knickers or panties, all in the same story. Sorry, but to me panties are always panties. Anyway, nice story and I enjoyed it very much even with the few minor errors. Thanks

awesome work!!! loved it!!! one of the best orgasms i have ever got by reading anything!!!

Shame we never got more stories from this author as this was absolute fire, has made me wet many a time over the years :)

I liked it!

Thanks for sharing.

that was wonderful!!!

It's never too late to come back to this story. You have a gift. The first part was wonderful.