All Comments on 'The New Slave Ch. 10'

This is my fav master-slave story so far

Loved it it's the best I have read so far... Loved how it ended. Can't count to how many times I came from reading it. Loved the interaction they had with others. Would recommend this to others to read.

This series makes being a gay male slave very appealing to me!

Anyone experiencing rough anal sex rape knows; that the best counselling involves meekly submitting to a tenderly-loving male counsellor, immediately afterward! Lets hope his rapist wasn't HIV positive or hadn't shared his siphilis infection?

loved it.....

Barbara needs to get a grip.....its just a story....sarcasm is the lowest form of wit…..

It took me a week to read all ten chapters because I kept getting "going" and had to take a "break". Whew! Many thanks to the author.

I didn't like the end, even though I loved all the other parts. Too many revelations in one part, too fast moving - would have been better to combine it with the 9th part, or to add more story to it. It reads like an epilogue that can be broken down to "and they lived happily ever after".

That was shockingly cute and hot as Hell. I agree that the last chapter seemed a little rushed but it didn't leave any loose ends which is nice. In short I loved it! Keep up the good work! :D

I thought it was a great ending and am glad that they are still together. Would have preferred Jason going to jail, it was rape after all and he nearly died... but the boys did meet out justice

Can't wait for more stories from you

An absolutely brilliant story, I loved the interaction between the main protagonists. Particularly pleased with Vince turning the two bullies, as I have always been of the opinion that those who pick on the weak and helpless and are totally homophobic, are in fact closet Gays without the balls to come out and admit their interest in other guys. Well done, a really erotic and well written series. I look forward to reading more from your pen (O.K. P.C. but you know what I mean.) Good luck with your future work.

i've never left a comment on here, but i want you to know that this is my favorite story! Lots of hot, raunchy, gay, bondage sex with a romantic, loving twist. Absolutely brilliant!

I really enjoyed this story. Bondage and being dominated is a fantasy of mine. You did an excellent job! Thank you!!

I think I'm in love with you! ;D But I know I'm in love with this story. Vince and Daniel, a love for the ages. I will never forget this story. Thank you!

Thank you

This was a beautiful story

Again thank you so much.

Please keep your wonderful, stories coming

Thanks again martin_x59

Sincerely yours

Awl4u

thank you so much Martin for writing this story. I must say I am already in love with Vincent he knows exactly what sissy boys like me need and desire soo much and it was wonderful that even with all the different gay sex scenes, the homo love for one another kept shining through . thanks again kisses from , sissy julianne

totally in love with story

Same this is the second time I have read this story and it is even better than the first time plus I love happy endings

Just found this story and read it. It was a blast. I especially love the ending you put to it. I can't wait to read more of your stories

Great story. Although I am not into bondage, I did like this. You are an excellent writer.

You are a very talented writer.

How come Daniel and Vince didn't marry? Daniel should get a complete HEA.

Excellent story ,one of the best in literotica !

I still wish something like that would happen to me

I don't often read series because I find they lose their way or become repetitive. You achieved a good, flowing storyline which progressed well with good use of a limited number of characters. A few errors in text, but they didn't distract from the thoroughly enjoyable tale. Well done

I wish you'd stop** apologizing for your lack of "writing skills". I've read a lot of stories on Literotica and this is the best I've read in a long while! Thank you :)

Your story is sooo good I read it in record time and enjoyed *almost* every moment of it - this has, of course, nothing to do with your writing skills, but with the theme itself - Although I found the hot scenes between Sir and Daniel gave me a hard-on, I must say I was never really into BDSM - there is some cruelty about it, that totally puts me off. I can't understand that in order to achieve pleasure you have to torture someone to death ! To make somebody scream and cry with pain to the point of blubbering is just not for me. I do however understand the total trust that will lead you to submit to an alpha male ! That being said, I think you're a master storyteller and I just couldn't put this one down - I will keep on following your work - I've been absolutely loving it ! Keep up the excellent work !! :))

You are the most amazing spectacular author ever!!!!!!!! I want to read this story a million times over! I so wish this would happen to me though.. You wrote all of my fantasies

This story was so good. Erotic as hell and a fabulous read. I look forward to reading all of your submissions. You are a gifted writer.

this was a wonderful story. Thank you for creating and sharing

Awesome story made me shoot my load for master

Jesus Christ that was AMAZING. Omg this story helped me come to terms with my kinks. Thank you SO SO SO MUCH. This was so sweet and hot and kind and ugh just bravo, bravo indeed. Amazing story.

Thank you for that I enjoyed it immensely, I’m working my way through your work now . Hope we get lots more x

Hello

This story was totally enjoyable.

I found this story. I enjoy bondage and the such so thumbing through the pages I came across this one.

It kept me interested, and satisfied.

Looking forward to another of your stories

thank you so much

Rick

A wonderfully sweet romance. I loved it! Thank you for posting.

Holy shit man this is amazing I can literally imagine the whole thing

This is an awesome story. Absolutely loved it !!!

One of the Best!!! A twisted Love story as no Love Deeper then that of a Master and their Slave as unconditional

Only thing better would be to have Jason strung up in the cellar as a pain gimp slave like pulp fiction only able to grunt and groan. I hope to find my "Daniel" or Danielle someday

Wow what a great story I wish I was 18 again and could find a master this story makes me see how much I missed in life

very good.Best I've read.