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***This story is a stand alone, but I might be willing to continue on if there is enough of a response for it. Thank you for reading this and have a good day.***
- COMMENTS
nighthawk22204about 2 years agoHot and romantic. Sure, paragraphing would make it much more readable, but it has to be read as a continuing dialogue within a train-of-thought expository about a horny teen and a luscious Sweetie. I love her description and wish I could share my bed with her. The dialogue is very well quoted, even without the paragraphing. Parts 2 and 3 and 4 could expand on their furtive relationship at her home and elsewhere. Will she worry about pregnancy or STD?? Will Will find any other conflicting relationships? Will Kimi bring any classmates home to visit and Possibly co-opt the lovers clandestine relationship?
mrdata9770over 2 years ago(12/17/2021) This was an enjoyable read and needed to be continued but it's been more than 19 years now. Too bad, I'm sure it would have been great. 5 stars.
Rancher46about 3 years agoWhat a great forbidden love story. The only problem is that it needs another chapter to make it great. Why authors leave their readers hanging I will never know. But a story written in 2002 will probably never be finished so I guess it is up to the readers imagination to complete the story in their own mind. Sad, but that is the way it goes. 5 stars
