by LingerieRobot
The Next Rose is the bomb! I read it and then re-read it again, it's just that good. The premise is deliciously deviant. I love it when Sophia asks "Adrienne-Rose" if she fucks better than her sister and "Adrienne-Rose" says yes but she makes love better than you - frigging classic:) Aah, the webs we weave but looks like the spiders got caught by the fly ass "Adrienne-Rose."
do a part 2 to resolve the issues not resolved in this part--Adrienne's search for deeper relationships, Sophia's enabling, and Daphne's grief. You've created a good set of characters and I want them to hang around a little longer.
I'm simply stunned by the superbly crafted storyline, how incredibly vivid Rose-Adrienne is/are, & Dapbne & Sophia each unique & exquiste. Great kinky plot with amazing detail & depth for such a short story. And the incredibly complex exploration of the physical & psychological ghosts of grief. This is stellar prose. Thank you for this wonderful story.
XOX
Taylor
I was well thought out. Touching passionate but most of all very sensitive. This tale most assuredly rates 5🌟 's.
I liked the story, but so frequently I've found stories that were great where other commenter’s implore the author to write a part 2, and invariably the sequel is just...lousy.
The characters who were so new and distinct in the original become familiar and staid, and just abused as the writer tries to wring something out of them that has a hint of the first story – but it either turns into more of the same plotline or something so out of what you believe the character of the story to be that it jars your delight.