All Comments on 'The Night That Changed My Life'

Well done mate! With the exception of taking it in the arse with no lube the very first time and not screaming in pain, thought it was realistic.

I have taken your comment on board and in the future I shall remember the lube or screams of pain depending which the story calls for.

You have captured a first time experience just as it should happen. I am glad to see that you wrote it the way you did with a bit of true emotion that led John to enjoy his first time. Keep up the great work.

Loved this story, short but so hot. No over doing the past of the characters, felt the uncertainty of John but the lust and need to try and fulfill his curiosity with a non pushy gay guy who wants both of them to enjoy his first time. I know from my first time when I was a middle aged man (not the time as a boy experimenting) it makes all the difference not to be pushed to far.