All Comments on 'The Novice Ch. 04'

Damn. Finish the story

Nooooooo! I'm so invested in this HOTTT story and the characters. Does anyone know of the author is published somewhere?

Where are you??? Please!!! Another chapter!!!

Yet again I forgot to skip to the end to check the comments to see if the story wasn't finished.

This is good... If you don't mind NO ENDING

Loved this story and so disappointed that you haven't written more of it. Looks like it's been two years since you added anything. Where did you go?!?

I never comment on anything but it is with GREAT desperation and arousal that I URGE you to continue this story. PLEASE!

Finish this story please. Give it a good ending with Lukas.

Please continue! Don't leave us hanging!

I am a big fan of all your stories, but this one might be my favorite! Please continue!

Amazing,I can't stop reading!! 12 stars out 5!

Am addicted, where is CH 5 please

Can't wait to see where this story goes...

I'm so disappointed that there isn't a chapter 5!

Audrey is such a wonderfully written character! Thanks for bringing her to life and giving her the opportunity to be with the man who can truly bring out the sexual goddess within her! Bravo!

As an aside, you have motivated me to submit some stories I have already written. Thanks and warmest wishes! Alchemy1888.

I am horny and I want to keep reading!

Finally they are together as one! The way they should be and he has taken what should have been his all along! And then BAM!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEEEEEEEASE!!! :D

So hot... I came all over my computer.

Please please please write more

You should write more. This is screaming to be continued.

Although there are a few mishaps here and there that interrupted the flow, your passionate way of writing leaves me wanting for more. As much as I'm craving a Ch. 5, I think this is the end. Poor Aubrey (I've been thinking of her as Aubrey because my sister's name is Audrey, and to think of my sister in this erotic manner would be too weird!). Now that she's been caught, she should just confide in Lukas, marry her man, and open up an orphanage. Now they can live passionately ever after. There. Problem solved. Thankfully you more work that I can read!

This is the second time I've read this...wow is all I can say. Please please please finish!

Great story! Don't suppose there is a chance for an ending?

This is one of those stories for me, there's less that half a dozen in total, on this site that affect me in this way, but its got under my skin.

I keep checking back, every so often, hoping that something has changed but it never has.I hope one day you find the time and the inclination to finish it Wishfulthinking, its so so so good. <3

Please keep writing. I am waiting eagerly to know what happens next.

Keep writing - we want to know what happens.

Please let us know how this will end! Can't wait to be continued!

Like so many others who've read this and left comments here, I certainly hope you write an ending to this excellently written story!

What happens to Audry and Beth? Does Lukas defend Audry to Mother Superior and when she tries to force Audry to go back to the convent, does Lukas step in and stop her?

Will the brothers Lukas and the convent father, lock horns and do battle?

However you choose to finish out this story, please do, so that we know how these main characters lives end-out, by story's end, no matter how many chapters that takes you!

This is one of my most fav story's on this web-site! Its excellent and great writing skills!

Thank you!

Please continue, I'm loving your characters

I loved the story and the ultimate happy ending. I hope there are more in the near future. Seems I am not he only one who really liked it. More please.

Please please please come back and continue this series!

Paying attention to the dates this author's stories were posted, it seems the author no longer publishes works under this membership.

Will there be more chapters? If so when can we expect them.

Im not waiting for chapter 5... But a new series along the same line of how priests abused women's religosity around that time....perhaps fast forward to the recent sex scandals still involving the Church? Hahaha...

I am waiting on pins and needles! Please finish!

Please finish.

Please continue!! I've downed 3 cups of coffee frantically reading this story! Hope to see chapter 5 soon!

You've left me searching frantically for chapter 5. So unkind....

More please!!!!!

please continue!!!!

Yes , it was one of the best that i have read, and the writing was tasteful, great writing, lovely story line ,not a moment dull.

some of it may be true.Live near a monastery, and have heard tale like these from the people who are employed there. Not to say anything about the blue movies that a watched, by these priest in training.Will there be more.?

This is so intense! I am on the edge of my sofa begging the to leave and they lay there to only get caught!!! Thank you for the rollercoaster ride!!! Well done. I can't wait to read the rest... Patiently waiting while I crew down my nails.

"Then from behind Mother appeared Beth." That ALL? Oh please good cardinal, please ... give us moooreee!!! We want the rest of the manuscript!

I love it.

Wow!!!! Really, people! Great story, I hope it's not the ending, I really want Audrey to find herself and her love. And the comfrantetion between the two brothers!! Love your stories!!!

Please write more!

are you fucking kidding me.....you write a story that with each chapter gives me an impossibly harder wood and then you dont write the fucking ending of it?

Surely, you wouldn't end the story now?? For shit sakes! Don't leave us with this story bringing us to a raging woodie, then left hanging like this, with no place left to go with it! This is great writing so far!

We have to find out what happens to Audrey, how her life works-out! What about Beth's life? Will Lukas give Lecherous Mother Superior and Father Matthews their proper comeuppance?

I so hope we get to read about a one-sided free-for-all between those two brothers, where Lukas keeps the upper-hand and beats shit outta his miserable wretch of a brother, Father Matthews, and does so, John Wayne style! That'd be FUN! :)

Regardless how you choose to end this story, it isn't anywhere near finished YET!!

You just can't stop it now! This story is too good! A rock-solid double gainer boner or twat-diddler! :)

Your writing is excellent!

Thank you for the great story, just finish it and don't leave us in suspense too long as you finish and post the last chapters here? We just gotta know how this story ends!!

Thanks!

Fantastic story! Great characters, development, and super hot love scenes. I NEED to know what happens in the end to Audrey and Lukas and Beth. Please please please write more!

Is part of the story missing! How could it just end like that?!?

More. Much more.

Please give us chapters 5, 6, 7,..... this is great! And I am soon rooting for Lukas!

I am loving this story.I have to know what happens now! PLEASE keep writing!!

Where is chapter 5? I need it! NEED IT!!!

Please, I need chapter 5. I need it.

Tooooo much of a cliff hanger but awesome and sexy. Both brothers seem yummy, I would not mind being under father Matthews instruction!

OH MY GRACIOUS! WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER? MY WELL-BEING HANGS ON CHAPTER 5

I couldn't sleep until I had finished it. Stayed up til 4:30! Can't wait for more!

wow this is an amazing amazing story! I need more, it's gotten me so wet and needy, please write more!

OMG You must finish this, it's brilliant!!

I ran across this story earlier this evening and have read through all of it in one sitting!

Why have you not published this?????? Or have you and I've missed it somewhere like BookStrand or Silver Publishing or Dreamspinner Press????? Please, please finish as soon as possible!!!!!!!!

Your talent of seduction through your writing is powerful, and it is cruel to not give this tale a befitting end.

I need more! I want to know what happens with Audrey and Lukas! Please?!

Please more of her awakening! I would love to see another interaction between Audrey and Mother Superior...and perhaps Beth as well.

Very passionate and I love the relationship between Aubrey and Lucas a whole lot more than I do with Aubrey and Louis. It's nice to see the difference though in how each of the brothers try to "possess" Aubrey. Also, I feel that you should continue whenever possible! This has been very exciting and I'm a major fan of your writing!

I'm dying of curiosity about what happens between Audrey and Lukas! You have to bring this story to an end.

For the sake of your MANY MANY fans, PLEASE continue this story.

I am a huge fan, and I think 59 comments is a good sign you need to continue. I know what it is like to hit a road block in writing, but hopefully it will pass soon! Thanks for the exhilarating thus far.

Please may we have some more? Well written erotica is extremely hard to come by and in my book, you're right up there with our beloved Dr. Mabeuse!

Where's the rest?? Please finish this story, you are one of the best writers on this site and it's sad that this much-read and widely appreciated story remains unfinished.

You are here by requested to continue at the request for your dedicated readers.

Thank you

Why leave this and so many of your other stories unfinished. This was just starting to get really good. Please finish these stories I know its been several years but please finish them I really enjoyed reading your stories till the end where you leave everyone hanging.

When are you going to finish this?

you totally have to finish this!!

CHAPTER 5, we all gotta have it.

finish this story!!!! Pretty, pretty please!! This has been a great story so far, so please finish it!!!

I really hope that you finish this story! It's been one of my favorites and I really do not want the story to end here.

please continue the story!!!!!! this by far is my favorite story here...what will happen next? Please keep Lukas and Audrey together!

for you to finish this story.

Please continue this storyline. It is captivating and my entire body is on fire wanting more.

We need more. Please finish this story, and soon.

Please please please please please tell us more. And until you do, I'm off to imagine Audrey and Lukas's future together ...

This story was wonderful ... i like everyone else that you caught the attention of would love to see how things plays out from here ... Thank you for writing it so well with all the small twist and turns in it

Finish the next one!!!!!

Seriously good! Please hurry up and finish the next one! I am dying to find out what happens next! Xxx

most amazing ever!! pleaase please please finish this, its the best one ive found on this site!!

I would love to read more of this. LOVE IT!

PLease hurry and continue this! Good job ending with a cliffhanger, it just makes us want to keep reading even more!

this series is excellent as is much of your other work. Superb

Finish. This.

This cannot seriously be the last chapter available ... I have to have more of this story ... I have been enjoying this site for nearly a year now and this is ABSOLUTELY ONE OF THE BEST ... please don't leave us waiting too long

You have me panting and breathless--the story must go on!

Please please continue with the story!

All ur stories r wonderful

come on plzzzzz tell us what happens next??

Will there be a confrotation between brothers?!

Thennnnnnn?????????????????? plzz tell me

& other then that u r a wonderfull writer love u muahhhhhhhhh

So good :)

More please.

Your style sweeps me away. Loved it

please, please continue. I LOVE this and all your other stories and can't wait for them to continue.