by WatchingCloud
Unexpected story, gentle, sexy. sensual love story.Wish would continue as they enter same college.If not, gentle interlude. more implied. than explicit. Enjoyed the feeling of sexuality awakening , and.exploring.Makes me nostalgic for my remembered youthful exploitations.Now in my 70's. remembrance is sweet
I'd enjoy following Josh and Maya until and as they attend Beaverville (pun intended), sharing room, I'd hope, and life as students.
Thank you for this fresh story. I like to know the location of that paradise 😉
Natural pools often have such spirit that make difference with all other places and favors love.
Can develop a story of soft gentle sensual love making, while others can write of sex.
Enjoyed your story.
Well done!
Love your stories.......the natural intimacy and romance between the couples makes a very nice read.
Great story!!!! To bad no other chapters where written. Could have been an interesting few more chapters.
One of my favorite stories. Always leaves me with a smile no matter how many times I have read it.
PLEASE, give us more! Really enjoyed this! The couple reflected innocence, passion, and an Outlook on life I often find missing in people at this age.
Another excellent story... easy to see why this won a writing contest. Thanks...
great series. I can imagine the fun the "kids" will have dropping innuendos of their parents nicknames to watch the parents blush and reactions. Perhaps no need for the top bunk at the cabin anymore?
I share the opinion of many. This excellent story deserves to be continued. For those of us who are nudists or naturists, the author writes as if they have also had the euphoric experience of social nudity. Good stuff - hope to read a sequel at some point.
Great story, very fun and sexy. Captures the innocence of nudism perfectly! Would definitely like to read future chapters with the kids and parents returning to the pool and letting nature take it's course.
I've come back to this one a few times. Each time I enjoy it just as much as the first.
This is the second story of yours I have read, and again it was a pleasure to read someone who can write.
About the clamor for a continuation, I don't think it needs one. That is, I don't know where it would go. If the story was about sex, then yes, it could take them off in several directions for different adventures. But this is a romance: they have discovered each other and they are going off to college together. Either they stay together, eventually get married, and live happily ever after, or they split up and find other people, and I'd rather not read that. (I should say, I'd rather not read it again. I read a really long story on here about a guy who falls in love with his cousin, but then she decides it's wrong and breaks it off, they both get married, he loses touch with her, his wife dies, and they finally get back together in their 50s. Lots of sex along the way, but more drama than I want.)
Lots of hormones and a nymph for encouragement. Very realistically done with a lot of pleasure.
I read this a few years ago but didn't realize it till I was about half way into it... so I kept reading. I can think of a few times in my younger years where something like this almost happened... but didn't. <LOL>
Thrilled to be discovering these "older stories" and their authors that put Lit on the map. Quality does last!
Just came back to this after a long time. It's still my all time favorite story on this site.
A wonderful romance and one of very few that I give five stars. Well done.
Did they really need Joella? Seems to me that male and female hormones were enough to spark nudity. But what the heck, Joella gave them a valid excuse to get naked. All in all, it's a great story.
Too bad I can't give it more than 5 stars. For me, this is one of the most romantic and best stories I've read so far!