by Honey123
I must say, as a writer and voyeur, that this story was wonderful. Thank you ..
You REALLY made her sound sexy and horny! Not to mention the risk factor, which often enhances a tale like this.....he doesn't want to make things awkward with John. I can tell that. Neither does Val. But they can't fight it anymore. It's only human. They have needs, find each other attractive, and up yielding to it in a rush. Who wouldn't? Very good. After a bit, I even forgot about the age difference. Once again, you've done quite well.
What an increditable, beautiful sexy mind you have. And as you know, the mind is the most powerful sex organ in the body. Keep up the great work.
Absolutely one of your better works. The story plays off in a wonderful setting with an exagerated reality. This is the kind of story I love to read.
very erotic and steamy. You did your friend justice and then some.
I loved it! I am the Jeff in the story....this was an amazing story to read! Thanks Honey123!
I was that young, eager and horny. Now, I'm just not as young anymore. Fantastic story.
Great characterizations.
Could I have more, please?
how did i miss commenting on your story?! might be because i had advance read?? anyway, brava sweetsexy.. more more!!!
My breathing's just getting back to normal! Hot as hell, Miss Hot-crotch!
Honey, I love the situation you set up here and it is a very hot tail, er, tale. See what you made me do? Seriously, great job and keep it up.
A well written story . I enjoyed it very much. A sexy , hot , turn-me-on and could be very true. The picture of the Author is awsom ,very beautiful. KEEP WRITING