All Comments on 'The Obsession Ch. 01'

Definately hot hot and hot. Why couldn't that happen to me? I sure there'll be a ch. 2 and can't wait to read that one too. Your story doesn't have all the descriptive words used by far to many other authors; trying to make the story as nasty and vulgar as possible. A person doesn't need all that bull shit to make a story erotic, sexy, and a huge turn-on if you know what I mean. I'm not saying don't use specific words like cunt, cock, pussy, cum, things like that, but you use them to make a point, not just to hammer the reader with them. Your story is natural and far more believable and a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work. You are definately a favorite.

That was a sweet read, and I mean that in the older use of sweet. It had heart as well as hard.

It's been a long time since I've read a story that reads as well as this one. I hope the story continues!!!

wish i had a sister like her.. !! =(

This is a well written story that is extremely sexual. I would only hope that the author will continue with this couple and tell the rest of their story. Thanks

i stopped when she went back to his room no girl sister or not would go back they would just go home maybe in a few days or weeks she might write or email him but she sure wouldn't go back not to many good bro sis incest stories worth reading here anymore

It was a great story and who in the hell was that person before me? He needs to learn to at least write a correct sentence before complaining!

you rushed this so much it wasn't funny. as said by another no way in hell would she go back that day. i agree it would take several days before she emailed him she sure wouldn't want to see him or talk to him. delete it and rewrite it making it more realistic.