All Comments on 'The Offering'

Your story kept me enthralled, I couldn't stop reading!! You really should add more to this story!!!

Quite entertaining. I'm not much into girl-girl stories, but this one is nicely written and rather captivating.

-- KK in Texas

I wouldn't worry too much about the niche aspect. Good tales are good tales. Good luck in the contest.

story,I liked it a lot,good luck in the competition.

What a great story. I loved the detail and mystery. But what happened to Trent? You kept me enthralled and I never read stories about two women...just not my thing.

I think it is the level of detail that really makes it special. I for one enjoyed it immensely. Good luck in the contest.

was fantastic! I love ancient Egypt and your story was so descriptive! Good luck in the contest.

Wonderfully original offering for the contest! Good luck!

Love the way you integrated the mythology within the story. It added alot of depth. Well done. Gone luck in the contest.

very well written, and interesting...

What a great story! The details added interest - if only the Mummies movies were as erotic!

This story is one of the best I have read well done!

I love anything to do with ancient Egypt. This was a great story no matter where you set it!

/different but I liked it.

LL, I do know something about the history and the herstory of, Ancient Egypt.

I think you did a terrific job, blending modern and antiquity in such a skillfully imagineered tale of tail.

but am so glad I found this little gem.

I have walked the sands of the Valley of the Kings and Queens, visited sacred sights, and pondered the colorful walls. This story reminded me of some of the feelings and emotions generated while visiting this unique part of the world.

...than Independence Day 2.

This tale needs to be made into a full feature movie.

Not necessarily XXX, but i wouldn't mind that.

Excellently written, i am fascinated by ancient egypt myths, and cats, and lesbians, and tough, smart women, and you mingled all into one very pretty tale.

Loved it!

Thanks for your efforts, and please do not stop writing such good stories!