All Comments on 'The Office of Desire'

by Bethyboo

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Hayley18Hayley18over 6 years ago

So Hot,, not dragged out, well written lust, loved it from the beginning to the end

papagrizpapagrizabout 13 years ago
A VERY DIFFERENT START

to a very interesting short story. I do feel this story would have been better if you had slowed it down added more to it. I hope you will follow up on this relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good stuff, good place...

Just the kind of office where I'd like to work instead of...

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