by AnsemRai
ENDING. Come on! I actually meant to vote a level higher, but my finger sometimes has a mind of its own.
It was too abrupt but, hopefully, means that there shall be a sequel? I liked the concept of the other world that kind of fit into a series of dreams I have had in the past. I always go to a resort that was called "Mantown," or "Maleville," or somesuch where I could have sex with any woman I wanted where I wanted--there were no restrictions. Anyway, the only complaint I have is that the story needed some slight editing in places but that is a mere quibble. If there is a sequel I will be looking for it--I would like to find out what the Goddess of Sex has in store for our hero in the future.
Hopefully the goddess explains everything....then sends him back to altworld for more sex.
Don't like it quite as much as Shift, but still really good.
I'm about half way though and I just have to stop and congratulate the author on his or her originality. Very creative, indeed!
This story has got to continue. I like it alot and want to read further adventures.
do they have incest in that world? if so, either John could've fucked Caitlin.
That was the strangest story I have ever read. I can't say that I liked it but had to finish it to see what happened. I think I will go to KFC tomorrow and get a BJ.
I can safely say that this story is THE best story that I've read on literotica yet.
The theme of casual and widely spread sex in public has always been my favorite. It is very rare to stumble upon a story that makes use of it and your writing style is amazing. Thank you!
Really cool concept. Would love to read more like it and explore the world in more detail!
Sounds like it was written by a 16 year old. How can readers honestly grade this as one of the best stories Literotica has to offer?